The Curse
FADE IN:
EXT.VILLAGE - DAY
Tall palm trees with barren hills in the backdrop. Clusters
of wooden huts with thatched roofs.
A group of elders play cards and smoke alternatively from a
hookah. Some children chase a fallen kite. A few cows and
chickens loiter around casually.
DAMAN,32,a dark, frail man, wearing an old, sleeveless grey
jacket and an off white lower, negotiates a muddy, narrow
village lane.
He treads hesitantly as if afraid of something. Despite his
poor appearance, there is a kind of grace about him.
A wealthy landlord emerges from the opposite direction,
sporting a shiny white attire and a yellow turban. The
moment he notices Daman, his recoils with disgust.
WEALTHY LANDLORD
You idiot, I've told you so many
times not to cross my path. But you
are a thick nut. Now my whole day
will be spoiled. Before I loose my
temper, just vanish from here.
DAMAN
My mistake sir, I'll be more careful
in future.
With folded hands, he steps aside. The landlord passes by him
quickly, making sure not to touch him even accidentally.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT.VILLAGE TEMPLE - DAY
An old, red stone temple. An orange flag flutters at the top.
Daman approaches the temple and stops at the steps leading
to the main prayer hall. PANDE,45,a fat priest, dressed in a
saffron robe, YELLS from the top.
PANDE
I told you last time also to stay
away from the temple.
DAMAN
That's why I always stand outside.
PANDE
But what's the need? Go now. It's
time for the evening prayers.
Daman bows before the temple and leaves.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT.VILLAGE - CENTRAL WELL - DAY
Daman ambles towards a worn out brick well, carrying an iron
bucket. Two haughty men stop him.
MAN#1
Where're you going?
DAMAN
I am thirsty. I need some water.
MAN#2
You can't use this well.
DAMAN
Then where do I go?
MAN#2
There is a well outside the village also.
DAMAN
But that is six kilometers from here and it's water is brackish.
A few other villagers gather around them.
MAN#1
That's none of our problems. Move on now.
DAMAN
Allow me today at least.
MAN#1
I think you need a kick.
The man dashes forward and pushes him hard. Daman hits the
ground with a LOUD THUD.
His bucket rolls over the ground, making a HOLLOW SOUND. He
stares helplessly at his tormentors.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT.ROCKY HILL - DAY
A rock-strewn hill feature, flat at the top, overlooking the
village.
Splendid statues of Indian Gods and Goddesses carved out of
rocks. Ganesha with his massive trunk, Rama with his enormous
bow and Kali with her menacing trident.
Daman works with a chisel and hammer on an awe inspiring
idol of Lord Krishna.
A tall and fair female tourist,30, carrying a rucksack
arrives at his open air workshop.
She takes off her load and wanders around the place.
He watches her silently. She throws up her hands in the air with
wonder and GIGGLES like a young girl.
FEMALE TOURIST
Hi! I am MITCHEL.
She extends her hand. He simply folds his hands and smiles
feebly. She waves at the statues.
MITCHEL
You made them?
He strolls up to an elevated platform. A mild wind plays with
his hairs.
DAMAN
These rocks talk to me. They convey
what shape they wish to assume. I
just help them with my tools.
Mitchel CLICKS a few pictures. She laps up a baby Hanuman.
MITCHEL
Can I take this?
He nods. She takes out a paper note from her purse and holds
out her hand.
DAMAN
Keep it down. I will pick it up
later.
MITCHEL
Why can't you take it from me?
DAMAN
Because I am an untouchable.
MITCHEL
Untouchable?
He tosses a small stone into the air.
DAMAN
Our society is divided into four
classes. I belong to the lowest.
MITCHEL
So?
DAMAN
Guys like me are declared
untouchables the moment they are
born. And we carry the burden of
this curse throughout our lives.
MITCHEL
Really?
DAMAN
It is believed that we bring bad
luck. People avoid even our
shadows. If we touch somebody, he
fears he would become dirty, unclean.
MITCHEL
Everyone's blood is red. I don't
believe in such nonsense.
She steps forward and slips the money into his hands.
MITCHEL
You are a great sculptor. There is
magic in your hands.
She lifts her rucksack, salutes him jovially and leaves. He
stares at the money in his hands.
The sun gradually sinks behind the hills. A strong wind
begins to blow, raising dust.
CUT TO:
EXT.VILLAGE - NIGHT
Lightening, THUNDER and rain. A ferocious tempest breaks out
and continues unabated.
CUT TO:
EXT.VILLAGE - DAY
Streets clogged with water. Broken walls and roofs. Uprooted
trees. Chaos.
CUT TO:
INT.VILLAGE TEMPLE - DAY
Pande stands in front of the deity's statue along with few
others. Dents and scratches mark the Goddess's face and body.
PANDE
I feel something ominous is about
to happen. Yesterday's storm has
damaged the Mother's statue. It is
so precious, at least a century old.
He turns towards YADAV,52,a lean, authoritative man, with deep
furrows on his forehead.
PANDE(CONT'D)
You are the village head. We need
your guidance.
Yadav's eyes remain fixed on the idol.
YADAV
There is only one man who can do
this task - Daman.
PANDE
What're you talking?
He touches his ears in disbelief.
PANDE(CONT'D)
How can we allow that low cast
untouchable to enter this sacred
temple?
YADAV
I have a plan. We will shift the
statue out of the temple.
PANDE
And?
YADAV
We will engage some good craftsmen.
Daman will guide them from a
distance. He won't be allowed to
touch or come near the statue.
PANDE
But can he manage so much?
YADAV
He must. We have no choice.
Yadav folds his hands in front of the Goddess and bolts out.
Others follow him.
CUT TO:
EXT.VILLAGE TEMPLE - DAY
MONTAGE -DAMAN OVERSEES THE RENOVATION WORK
--The statue stands on a round brick platform outside the
temple, beneath a peepul tree, surrounded by a circular
fence.
--A group of craftsmen work on the idol, their tools making
SOFT CLANKING SOUNDS.
--Daman remains outside the fence, gesticulating with his
hands, passing instructions.
--The craftsmen listen to him, trying to understand,
attempting.
--Daman throws up his hands in despair, squats on the
ground, brooding.
BACK TO THE SCENE
A fellow craftsman approaches him.
CRAFTSMAN#1
Brother, it's very difficult to work
like this. You are a master
craftsman. Your hands speak better
than your tongue. How can you run
this show, shouting from here?
Daman listens to him quietly, his eyes glued to the bust.
CUT TO:
EXT.VILLAGE TEMPLE - NIGHT
MONTAGE - FINAL WORK ON THE STATUE
--A full moon illuminates the surroundings brightly.
--Shadow of a man approaches the statue cautiously.
--He tip toes, removes the cover, takes out his tools and
starts working.
--The moon, the hands, WAILING of a dog.
END MONTAGE
CUT TO:
EXT.VILLAGE TEMPLE - DAY
Excited faces. Glowing eyes. Happiness. A crowd gapes at the
statue in wonder.
PANDE
With God's grace, this task is
finally over. If you ask me, the
Goddess appears more beautiful now.
A general MURMUR of agreement. A craftsman steps out.
CRAFTAMAN#1
But we haven't done this job.
YADAV
What do you mean?
CRAFTSMAN#1
I mean such great work can be
done only by Daman. The credit must
go to him.
A beat.
No one moves. Yadav paces up to the craftsman, some dry leaves
get crushed under his feet, making a CRACKLING SOUND.
YADAV
Certainly...
His features distort with anger.
YADAV(CONT'D)
… he will get his due.
CUT TO:
EXT.VILLAGE - OPEN GROUND - DAY
Two men drag Daman with the help of ropes tied to his
arms. They bring him to the center of a hostile crowd which
SHOUTS and ABUSES him constantly.
Someone chucks a stone at him. A thick line of blood oozes
out from his right temple. His face convulses with pain.
At one corner, Yadav sits along with some village elders. He
raises his hand. The crowd calms down.
YADAV
As you are all aware, an awful crime
has been carried out in our
village. And the criminal is in
front of you.
The crowd WOOS loudly.
YADAV(CONT'D)
By touching the statue of Goddess,
this untouchable has committed an
unforgivable offense.
Daman bites his lips.
YADAV(CONT'D)
All members of the village
committee have jointly decided that
this man should be given an
exemplary punishment so that no one
dares to pull off such a mistake in
future.
DAMAN
Please forgive me. I never meant to
hurt anybody. I just wanted to fix
the idol, to make it beautiful
again.
YADAV
You did what was forbidden. Your act
is unpardonable.
He scans the crowd sternly.
YADAV(CONT'D)
Now, we will cut the hands that
dared to cross their limit.
He nods at his men. They shove and force Daman to lie on his
stomach.
DAMAN
(pleading)
For God's sake, let me go. I haven't
done anything wrong.
They tie him up firmly, making sure that that he cannot
move. Next, a bullock cart runs towards him at full throttle.
As it's heavy wooden wheels with thick iron rims pass over
his hands, the crowd CHEERS loudly. He HOWLS with pain, lying
there in a pool of blood and dust.
Yadav rambles forward.
YADAV
Throw him away. We now expel him
from our society.
The two men untie his body, hold him from the shoulders and
drag him on the ground. A small procession of children and
youngsters HOOT and move behind him.
They fling him outside the village boundary. He slithers on
the ground and tries to get up but crashes. His eyes close
as he loses consciousness.
A heavy shower begins, drenching him completely.
CUT TO:
INT.VILLAGE TEMPLE - DAY
The renovated statue of Ma Durga now stands at its original
location. Pande bathes and purifies the idol with fresh milk
amidst CHANTING of sacred mantras.
Yadav offers flowers at the deity's feet. The crowd PRAYS in
unison. Th e temple bells RING loudly.
CUT TO:
EXT.ROCKY HILL - DAY
A strong wind brushes against the grand busts of Gods and
Goddesses, raising dust.
Daman leans against a rock. Both his hands are wrapped in
dirty rags. He tries to pick up a chisel but it slips down
and hits the ground with a BANG.
Tears roll down his cheeks as he looks up towards the
heavens. The feeble SOUND of temple bells reaches the hill.
He folds his hands and bows down reverently in the direction
of the temple.
A white eagle hovers above the majestic statues.
FADE OUT:
Credits roll
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I 💕 Scriptwriting
Nice read
ReplyDeleteThank you so much.
Deleteकहानी का कथानक यही बताता है कि जो इंसान ईश्वर की रचना का सम्मान नहीं करता वो इंसान केवल और केवल मूर्ति को ही देख सकता है भगवान तो बहुत दूर की बात है। कलाकार को अस्पृश्य समझ उस की कला का निरादर करना भगवान का निरादर है । कलाकार की कला उसका आत्मसम्मान होती है ,ईश्वर का साकार रूप होती है। मूर्ति पत्थर में नहीं ,मूर्ति तो कलाकार के भीतर होती है जिस को वो पत्थर पर उकेरता है।
ReplyDeleteVery nicely brought out. The statue is not hidden inside the stone but inside the creator's mind.
DeleteDon't have words to express! Very touching. This is the bitter truth of the society.
ReplyDeleteYes Aanchal. Truth is always bitter.
DeleteWonderful story but it rips heart apart. It's so painful to imagine a time when such social hierarchy existed and which was torcherous in nature. Glad, now this practice doesn't exit, atleast openly, and hopefully uprooted from the existing society.
ReplyDeleteShalini, we can hope that such practices no longer exist. But I can say with certainty that the mindset which divides one human being from the other, it certainly exists.
DeleteTouching story.Very meaningful.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much 🙏
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