Timeless - One Minute Short Film


Boy with Granpa



FADE IN:

INT.JIMMY'S HOME -DAY

A spacious apartment. JIMMY, 7, fair with blue eyes, sits at
the dining table, unpacking a small card box. KATE, 40, slim
with black hair, plonks next to him, watching him intently.

                                             KATE
                         So, this box contains the most
                         exquisite watch in the world.

                                             JIMMY
                        Grandpa showed it to me last time.

He pulls off the tape with his tiny, pinkish hands.

                                              KATE
                        That was two years ago. Your
                        grandpa is no more now.

                                             JIMMY
                         His helper, she has sent this box.

                                              KATE
                        Poor woman! She had no choice. You
                        would neither eat nor sleep. You
                        just wanted that one thing.

Jimmy culls out a bulky wrist watch from the box. It sports
a worn out, brown leather strap and a scratchy glass dial.
He fiddles with the crown, the minute hand starts slithering.

                                             JIMMY
                       See, I told you!

Kate stares at him in confusion. The doorbell RINGS.

                                             JIMMY
                       Mom, I miss grandpa.

Kate purses her lips in despair and leaves.

 LATER

Kate enters, a bit exhausted. Jimmy sleeps peacefully on a
large sofa. The old watch sits pretty on his wrist. He holds a
photograph tightly. It shows

A BALD, SMILING OLD MAN CARRYING JIMMY ON HIS BACK

She touches Jimmy's face softly.

                                            KATE
                       This indeed is the best watch in
                       the world.

Jimmy smiles in his sleep.

                                                                                                         FADE OUT.







An Interesting Insight



Comments

  1. Dr. Manoj Garg18 March 2018 at 07:54

    I am really touched by the realistic & emotions revealed in the story.The writer Mr Manish Sharma has great potential to convey the message beautifully. Thanks.Waiting for more short stories.

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    1. Manish Sharma29 March 2018 at 23:15

      Thanks for reading Timeless. It was a small experiment to to convey the depth of a beautiful emotion in less than a page.

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  2. Shalini Singh29 March 2018 at 14:11

    Short, but fully conveys the hidden emotions in a very lucid way. Lovely film, though it finishes in ziffy but leaves a great mark on the reader. Waiting for the next story!

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    1. Manish Sharma29 March 2018 at 23:13

      Thanks Shalini. It was a small experiment for a one minute short. I tried to convey what it is that make something timeless.I will soon share my next with you.

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  4. Manish Sharma6 June 2021 at 12:55

    Thank a lot for your appreciation.

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  5. Dr. Ankur Goel7 June 2022 at 14:21

    One of the most supherb creation.

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